How not to write a murder story

By | June 5, 2013
Thankfully Ed gave me the use of his class for a couple of lessons so that I could do some research for my master’s. He was not wrong when he said they were all at different levels. One of the girls was the same level as their Chinese teacher (in my spelling test) and one boy cannot even understand me when I ask him what his name is. And they are hoping to study in New Zealand! 
My research concerns spelling strategies of Chinese students and I wanted to know whether, if I changed the way they learn spelling, they could spell unknown words better. So I taught them phonetics, the sounds that different vowel combinations make and I taught them about the magic ‘e’. 
It was a bit like
teaching primary kids. I had set them some homework the week before. I
told them that they were to write a murder story and that it all had to
be in the past tense and had to use thee of the new words they had
learnt. I only got a few handed in, one of which went like this..
.
This story was from
school , In that school their was best friend , but i don’t know what happen
for their, because Amy murder her friend , Let we to see what happen with them
.
their three was live
together,they from kindergarten to university never spared, Tina and Amy all talk
about in . Ramey always arrogant , but they never have quarrel .
In university they are
all live in accommodation . In the later years ,Tina have many people like her
, Ramey dislike Tina because she think she is bad girl , one day Tina was die ,
everyone think is Ramey , but she said not me , although she dislike her but we
are best friend ,not really dislike her , just feel something her style is not
her appetite.but none believe her because Amy is Ramey best best friend .
Until two years later ,
This murder was come out in the wash , Is Amy . Amy was jealous of Tina , so
the envy deceive her eyes .murder Tina ,Let Ramey put into prison two years .
jealous let the three girls lose many things . 
 
And don’t forget that these want to do a degree in New Zealand! 



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